Question

假定你是學生會主席李華。學校將舉辦一次以“校園生活·創(chuàng)意無限”(Innovations on Campus)為主題的創(chuàng)意作品展評活動。請你根據(jù)以下圖示，以短文
形式用英語寫一份書面通知。

注意:  1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫;
3.開頭及結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯: 校園campus       創(chuàng)意作品innovation     頒獎prize-giving

Answer 1

Notice
An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner.  Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.
Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.
All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure!  It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions. Call Li Hua at 44876655.
Come on, everybody! It’s your show time.
Student Union

試題分析：這是一篇書面通知的書面表達，要求作為學生會主席李華，就學校舉行的“校園生活，創(chuàng)意無限”的活動，給學生出一個書面通知，要點不是通過文字，而是通過圖畫表示出來，所以考生在寫作的時候，要認真看圖，通過圖畫找出所給的重要信息。有活動內(nèi)容，活動時間地點，和聯(lián)系人和電話等信息，弄清要點后，關(guān)鍵的是在寫作的過程中，也要注意人稱，時態(tài)語態(tài)和常見的語法問題，文章盡量簡潔，但是要想得高分，要特別注意使用一些高級詞匯和高級句型，如定語從句，強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組：around the corner.即將到來，Along with連同， hand in上交，occur to使想起，on show展覽， Look forward to盼望，句式上體現(xiàn)出多變的特點，如： Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.這句話用了定語從句， Note that your innovations must be school things. 這句話用了賓語從句，Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.這句話使用現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語和賓語從句。