Question

【題目】短文寫作（共1題；滿分30分）

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

“Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new.” －Albert Einstein.

注意：

①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

④詞數(shù)不少于120詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone must have made mistakes, from which they gain experiences and learn new things. However, many people are afraid of making mistakes.

Actually we all make mistakes when trying something new. I still remember the first time I cooked dumplings when my mother and my father went on holiday. I poured a bag of dumplings into the pot when the water was boiling, and then I put the lid on the pot. After a while I found all the dumplings stuck to the bottom. When I stirred them hard, I found all the dumplings broken. Later, my mother told me I should have stirred them as soon as I put dumplings into the boiling water.

My experience teaches me I will never learn new things unless I try. So we should not be afraid of making mistakes because making mistakes is part of our life.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示并結(jié)合事例寫一篇短文。所給的提示是愛因斯坦的名言“一個從未犯過錯誤的人，也從未曾嘗試過新的事物。”從提示中可以看出，寫作時應該強調(diào)“勇于嘗試、不怕犯錯”的精神。注意還要結(jié)合自己的事例。多使用一些高級詞匯和短語、定語從句、非謂語動詞、虛擬語氣、名詞性從句等知識，還要注意上下文的銜接、連貫。

亮點說明：

范文注意使用However, Actually, and then, After a while, Later, So等來銜接前后句，使作文顯得緊湊；

范文使用了情態(tài)動詞表推測和虛擬語氣must have made mistakes，should have stirred them；定語從句from which they gain experiences；時間狀語從句when my mother and my father went on holiday，as soon as I put dumplings into the boiling water；條件狀語從句unless I try；原因狀語從句because making mistakes is part of our life等，使作文句式長短結(jié)合，作文變得生動、豐富。