【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

I have always been the big fan of music, but to be honest I don’t know any person whom has ever openly disliked it. It’s one of true friend in life because it can be enjoyed by anyone and everyone. With books, you have to be able to read, and music has no limits, no special conditions and was easily enjoyed by all. I don’t think there are many things in life for which have such a directly and clear influence on one’s feeling. Obvious, however, there are some people who are much influenced by music, and of course it depends what sort of music they’re into. Watch people react to one of their favorite songs is actually the best thing ever.

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【解析】本文為介紹說明文。作者在文章介紹了自己是一個超級音樂粉絲，闡述了音樂對人們的積極影響。

第一處：the改為a；考查冠詞。此處泛指“一個超級音樂粉絲”，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞。故the改為a。

第二處：whom改為who/that；考查定語從句連詞。此處為定語從句，先行詞為any person，連詞在從句中作主語，whom在從句中作賓語。故whom改為who/that。

第三處：friend改為friends；考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)前面的限定詞one of可知，此處應(yīng)使用friend的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故friend改為friends。

第四處：and改為but；考查連詞。根據(jù)語境可知，前后句意存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故and改為but。

第五處：was改為is；考查動詞時態(tài)。此處描述的客觀事實，應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時。故was改為is。

第六處：去掉which前的for；考查定語從句。此處為定語從句，先行詞為many things，連詞在從句中作主語，明顯介詞for多余。故去掉which前的for。

第七處：directly改為direct；考查形容詞。此處與clear并列，一起修飾名詞influence，應(yīng)使用形容詞形式。故directly改為direct。

第八處：Obvious改為Obviously；考查副詞。此處修飾整句話，應(yīng)使用副詞形式。故Obvious改為Obviously。

第九處：depends后加on/upon；考查固定短語。depend on/upon“依靠，依賴”為固定短語。故depends后加on/upon。

第十處：Watch改為Watching；考查非謂語動詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處為主語，動詞原形不能作主語，ing作主語時表示經(jīng)常性的行為。故Watch改為Watching。

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