Question

16．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 （﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
 Dear Peter，
       I'm very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with．
       Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own．Apart from the convenient public transportation，our private car will make your visits difficult．Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities，I'm sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．Above all，they hosted the American student last year，through that they gained lots of experience．In addition，the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
Hope you enjoy your stay here．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封書信，講述了作者為一名即將到來的留學(xué)生介紹要寄宿的這個(gè)家庭的基本情況，從住，行，吃等各個(gè)方面做了詳細(xì)的解釋．

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged∧you to stay with．
                                                                                                                                               加for
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own．
Located                                                                          is
Apart from the convenient public transportation，our private car will make your visits difficult．
                                                                         their                                                easy
Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities，
                                                             fluent
I'm sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．
                                                去掉或加in
Above all，they hosted the American student last year，through that they gained lots of experience．
                                   an                                                        which
In addition，the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
                         hostess's
Hope you enjoy your stay here．
Yours，
Li Hua．
1．加for．短語搭配，arrange sth for sb替某人安排某事．
2．Locating改為Located．短語搭配，be located in坐落在某地，作狀語時(shí)，be動(dòng)詞可以省略．
3．was改為is．文章講述的現(xiàn)在的情況，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
4．our改為their．邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤，句意表達(dá)的是the host family他們的私家車．
5．difficult改為easy．邏輯錯(cuò)誤，句意表達(dá)的是除了便捷公共交通工具，主人家還有私家車，可以讓你的出行更方便．
6．fluently改為fluent．修飾名詞English要用形容詞．
7．to去掉或加in．短語搭配，have no trouble in doing sth做某事沒困難，in可以省略．
8．the改為an．句意表示的是泛指，要用不定冠詞，American是元音開頭的，要用an．
9．that改為which．題干是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，介詞后指物的要用關(guān)系代詞which．
10．hostess改為hostess's．句意表達(dá)的是女主人的廚藝，要用名詞所有格表示．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．