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8．假如你是李明，上周你班同學(xué)就"畢業(yè)前我們?cè)摓閷W(xué)校做些什么？"進(jìn)行了討論．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，將同學(xué)們的建議用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信告訴你的筆友David，并談?wù)勀愕南敕�及理由�?br />1．為圖書(shū)館捐書(shū)； 2．美化校園；  3．刻苦學(xué)習(xí)．
注意：
    1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear David，
Last week we held an enthusiastic discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate．                                                                   

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給筆友David寫(xiě)一封信，告知他你班同學(xué)就"畢業(yè)前我們?cè)摓閷W(xué)校做些什么"進(jìn)行討論的建議并談?wù)勛约旱南敕�及理由�?br />寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．為圖書(shū)館捐書(shū)； 2．美化校園  3．刻苦學(xué)習(xí)．
重要短語(yǔ)：collect money （籌集資金），be proud of （感到自豪），In one's opinion（某人認(rèn)為），do something meaningful （做有意義的事），do some voluntary work （做志愿者工作），beautify the environment（美化環(huán)境），give sb some advice（給某人一些建議）．
【高分句型】
1．For example，we can do some voluntary work ①to beautify the school's environment or try to get better results in the coming exams ②so that our school will be proud of us．
①此處是兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)．
②此處是由"so that"引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
2．Other students think that it's not necessary to spend money．
此處是由"think"引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句中又有"it"引導(dǎo)的形式主語(yǔ)，其結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+to do sth"．

解答 Dear David，
 Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate．The students in our class have different suggestions．
      Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or something else for the school．（為圖書(shū)館捐書(shū)） Other students think that it's not necessary to spend money．We can study hard and make our school feel proud of us．（美化校園）
      In my opinion，we don't have to spend money．We can do something meaningful without money．For example，we can do some voluntary work to beautify the school's environment or try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us．【高分句型】（刻苦學(xué)習(xí)）
     I'd like to know your idea．Could you give me some advice？
 Best wishes!
 Li Ming

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