Question

My cousin Li Ming is a senior three student, who devoted himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class. In the evening, he continued to study at home until deeply into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, he was about to do his lessons while his father came up and advised him to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Li Ming enjoyed himself competing and chatting with his father and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic and active in class. He spent a whole day in the country, and Li Ming said what he had done was worth.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 devoted改為devotes,

 class改為classes, 

 deeply改為deep,

 .too改為so,

  In改為On, 

 while改為when,

 .came up改為came up with, 

 relaxing改為relaxed, 

 and改為but,

 worth后加it或改為worthwhile

【解析】

試題分析：本題考查較為細致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用。一般的這類題型不會出現(xiàn)太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎知識較多。平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。

 devoted改為devotes,  本文的基本時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時，故使用devotes.

 class改為classes,  前面有形容詞several修飾，后面使用可數(shù)名詞的復數(shù)形式。

 deeply改為deep,  deep指具體意義的深入；deeply指抽象意義上的深入。本句中的deep into night指到深夜。

 too改為so, 固定句式so…that…如此…以至于….；too不能用于這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)。

  In改為On,  具體到某一天的早晨使用介詞on。

 while改為when, 固定句式be about to do sth when….正要做某事，在這時…。這里的when是一個并列連詞，表示“在這時…”

 .came up改為came up with,  動詞短語come up with想出，提出；指他們想出了一個好主意。

 relaxing改為relaxed,  本句的主語是人，故使用過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞relaxed來修飾人。

 and改為but,   他在鄉(xiāng)下度過了一天，但是他認為這是值得的。上下文之間存在著轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故使用but。

 worth后加it或改為worthwhile  be worth后面可以接賓語。指這樣做是值得的。也可以單獨使用worthwhile，做表語。

考點：考察短文改錯