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10．假設(shè)你是李津，最近在你班的班會(huì)上進(jìn)行了一次有關(guān)是在國(guó)外讀大學(xué)還是在國(guó)內(nèi)讀大學(xué)的討論會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文短文為校報(bào)投稿

在國(guó)外上大學(xué)	在國(guó)內(nèi)上大學(xué)
優(yōu)勢(shì)：學(xué)校知名度高、注重實(shí)踐、環(huán)境優(yōu)雅	優(yōu)勢(shì)：優(yōu)秀的教師團(tuán)隊(duì)、設(shè)備先進(jìn)、學(xué)費(fèi)較低
不足：費(fèi)用高	不足：實(shí)踐的機(jī)會(huì)不多
你的觀點(diǎn)及選擇

注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)120；
2．要點(diǎn)要全；開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．
Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．
Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．
As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本文是"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章圖表和所給提示信息寫一篇短文，介紹就"是在國(guó)外讀大學(xué)還是在國(guó)內(nèi)讀大學(xué)"這一問(wèn)題的討論形成的不同觀點(diǎn)和看法．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．開頭-引出話題；2．贊成在國(guó)外上大學(xué)觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；3．贊成在國(guó)內(nèi)上大學(xué)觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；4．自己的觀點(diǎn)．
寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：hold a heated debate（進(jìn)行一個(gè)熱烈的討論），go abroad（出國(guó)），prefer to（更喜歡），domestic colleges（國(guó)內(nèi)大學(xué)），as far as sb be concerned（就某人所關(guān)注的而言），get over sth（克服某事），the obstacle of（…的障礙），the expense of （…的費(fèi)用），be advanced（先進(jìn)的），the chances to do sth（做某事的機(jī)會(huì)）．
【高分句型一】
1．Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．
此處是連接詞"whether"引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，主句為"Our class has held a heated debate"．
【高分句型二】
2．Some students think①that ②studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．
①此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，主句為"Some students think"．
 ②此處為動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)形式．
【高分句型三】
3．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．
此處是由連詞"although"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為"culture difference is a big problem"．
【高分句型四】
4．To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．
  此處是由不定式短語(yǔ)"To study abroad"作目的狀語(yǔ)，主句為"you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits"．

解答 Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．
    Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．【高分句型一】（開頭-引出話題）
    Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．【高分句型二】The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．（正反雙方論述各自的利弊）
    As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．【高分句型三】To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．【高分句型四】（自己觀點(diǎn)）
Yours，
Li Jin．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫好這類圖片及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．