【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中詢(xún)問(wèn)北京近幾年的變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行回復(fù)。內(nèi)容包括：

1．變化是什么

2．對(duì)你的影響；

3．期待朋友來(lái)北京

注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

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Yours

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim,

It’s so nice to hear from you. Knowing that you want to learn about the changes in Beijing these years, I’m more than willing to tell you.

In the past few years, great changes have indeed taken place in Beijing. To start with, Beijing boasts itself as a more and more international city with many big international events like Olympic Games held there. More and more foreign companies are set here which bring in more foreign people working and living here. Besides, there are more roads and subways built or being built, which relieved the problem of traffic jams in this busy capital. Shared bikes have become popular in Beijing as well. Speaking of the problem of air pollution, many measure like traffic control, using electricity or gas as fuel instead of coal…h(huán)ave been taken, which turn out well.

I’m taking all the advantages of all those changes as I am now riding a shared bike to school every day, breathing fresh air as well as keeping my body fit. You must have sensed my progress in English wording, since I enjoy talking with my foreign teacher and learn from him in my oral English class.

Anyway, I can’t wait to have you here to witness all those changes yourself. Come, and you will be stunned.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件，給英國(guó)朋友Jim介紹一下北京的變化。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。

要求：1．變化是什么

2．對(duì)你的影響；

3．期待朋友來(lái)北京

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

Learn about; take place; boast; international city; subways; bring in; traffic jams; shared bikes; take measures to do; turn out; take advantage of; can’t wait to do; stun..

第三步：連詞成句

1. Knowing that you want to learn about the changes in Beijing these years, I’m more than willing to tell you.

2. In the past few years, great changes have indeed taken place in Beijing

3 Beijing boasts itself as a more and more international city with many big international events like Olympic Games held there.

4. More and more foreign companies are set here which bring in more foreign people working and living here.

5 It relieved the problem of traffic jams in this busy capital.

6. Shared bikes have become popular in Beijing as well.

7. Many measure like traffic control, using electricity or gas as fuel instead of coal…h(huán)ave been taken, which turns out well.

8. I’m taking all the advantages of all those changes.

9. I can’t wait to have you here to witness all those changes yourself.

10. Come, and you will be stunned.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改

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