分析 這是一篇提綱作文,讓我們給美國朋友Tom就暑假里的打算會一封郵件,這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維,將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來.寫作需要用第一人稱,時態(tài)主要是一般將來時,內(nèi)容要點包括:未及時回信的原因; 你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等).我們此篇作文分為兩部分,第一部分為未及時回信的原因.第二部分為假期的打算.
重點短語與句型:
feel sorry for 感到抱歉
in time 及時
To start with首先,
What is more而且,此外
高分句型一:To start with,doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons..此句because原因狀語從句中含有not only…but also…句型前部分倒裝,后不倒裝,
高分句型二:What is more,doing voluntary work,I think,will make a great contribution to the society,which is able to enrich my life.
此句用了which引導非限制性定語從句.
解答 Dear Tom,
How is everything going?I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.You know,I've been preparing for the final exams these days,so I forgot to write back.In your letter,you asked me for my plans on summer vacation.Now,I am writing to tell you some specific details.(未及時回信的原因)
Overall,three things will make my summer vacation meaningful.To start with,doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons.(高分句型一)In addition,it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation,in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends.What is more,doing voluntary work,I think,will make a great contribution to the society,which is able to enrich my life(.高分句型二)I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.By the way,what's your plan to spend your summer vacation?I am looking forward to your reply(.假期的打算)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧
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