Question

近年來中學(xué)校園里的早戀現(xiàn)象越來越嚴(yán)重。假如你是李華，打算給當(dāng)?shù)匾患覉?bào)紙的編輯寫一封信，反映這一現(xiàn)象。要點(diǎn)如下：

現(xiàn)狀	中學(xué)生的早戀現(xiàn)象越來越普遍，家長和老師非常擔(dān)憂。
危害	早戀嚴(yán)重影響學(xué)習(xí)和生活；由于中學(xué)生身心都不夠成熟，早戀容易使他們收到傷害；早戀極難成功。
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

注意：1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)：100字左右。 3. 開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。

參考詞匯：早戀：puppy love   不成熟：immature

Dear Editor,

I am writing to raise public concern over puppy love in high school. _______________Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am writing to raise public concern over puppy love in high school. Nowadays, puppy love is becoming more and more common among middle school students. Parents and teachers both grow more and more anxious about it.

Puppy love can do serious harm to teenagers. Once they fall in love, they can’t concentrate on their lessons any more. No doubt it will affect their normal studies. Because middle school students are mentally and physically immature, it easily hurts both sides deeply. In fact, puppy love often ends in failure.

In my opinion，we should do proper things at proper ages. As students, our main task is learning. It’s hard for us to keep a good balance between learning and love. We should set high goals and spare no efforts to fight for them.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，話題是關(guān)于“學(xué)生早戀現(xiàn)象”，要點(diǎn)是以表額形式給出，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).但是你的觀點(diǎn)要自己組織，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。亮點(diǎn)有：We should set high goals and spare no efforts to fight for them.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。