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10．假如你是李華，是紅星外國語學(xué)校的學(xué)生會主席，根據(jù)雙方約定，你們打算今年夏天去英國StudioSchool進(jìn)行四個星期的學(xué)習(xí)和旅游．請你寫信給StudioSchool，就下面事宜進(jìn)行通告．
1．你們一行有30人，其中2位教師、18個男生，10位女生，希望他們安排home-stay家庭．
2．你們的計劃為上午上課，下午到圖書館學(xué)習(xí)，晚上自由活動．周末安排旅游．
3．盼望對方盡早發(fā)出正式邀請，以便辦理正式手續(xù)．
注意；1．可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫完整．
    2．字?jǐn)?shù)在100左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：辦理手續(xù)：go through all the procedures
        正式邀請函：formal invitation
Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students'Union of Hongxing Foreign language School．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As is stated in the agreement，we plan to send 30 students and teachers to have a study tour in your school this summer．
根據(jù)約定內(nèi)容，我們計劃在今年暑假安排一共30名學(xué)生和老師到你校學(xué)習(xí)參觀．
高分句型二：
Our group consists of two teachers and twenty-eight students，of whom 18 are boys．
我們一行人有2位老師和28個同學(xué)，其中18個是男生．
句型一 As is stated in the agreement…該句是一個由as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，as在從句中充當(dāng)主語，替代后面整個主句的內(nèi)容．
句型二 Our group consists of two teachers and twenty-eight students，of whom 18 are boys．該復(fù)合句中包含一個非限制性定語從句，該定語從句由介詞+關(guān)系代詞組成，其中whom不能由that替代．

解答 Dear sir，
   I'm Lihua，Chairman of the Students'Union of Hongxing Foreign Language School．As is stated in the agreement，we plan to send 30 students and teachers to have a study tour in your school this summer．（高分句型一）Now I'd like to say something about our visit，also there's something that we'd like you to arrange for us．
   Our group consists of two teachers and twenty-eight students，of whom 18 are boys．（高分句型二）It would be better if you could arrange host families so that we can have opportunities to practice our oral English．As for the activities，it is suggested we have English classes in the morning and study by ourselves in the library in the afternoon．In the evening we want to be free and do whatever we like．On Saturdays and Sundays，we'd like to visit some places of interest within the country．
   I would appreciate it if you could send us your formal invitation as soon as possible to that we can go through all the procedures．
   Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Lihua

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