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12．假設(shè)你是李華，你校英文報"My Point of View"一欄擬刊登"家庭與孩子成長"有關(guān)的內(nèi)容．現(xiàn)在很多家庭只有一個孩子，這樣的環(huán)境對孩子的成長是否有利？如果一個家庭可以有兩個孩子，那對孩子的成長又有什么樣的利弊？請你就這個話題給校報編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
With the implementing of family planning policy，most families have only one child．                           ．

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分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校英文報"My Point of View"一欄擬刊登"家庭與孩子成長"有關(guān)的內(nèi)容．現(xiàn)在很多家庭只有一個孩子，這樣的環(huán)境對孩子的成長是否有利？如果一個家庭可以有兩個孩子，那對孩子的成長又有什么樣的利弊？請你就這個話題給校報編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從利和弊兩個方面來討論該話題 2、提示是文章的總體框架，要在適當范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：the lack of缺乏；deal with處理；basically基本上；contribute to有助于；take care of照顧；be beneficial to對…有益；in my view以我的觀點來看
There are lots of problems with these children，one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people．（高分句型一） 
Recently a new policy has been adjusted nationwide，which allows a family to have two children．（高分句型二）ln the process of growing，the two can take care of each other，and share too much in common，which is beneficial to their character building and psychological health．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
       With the implementing of family planning policy，most families have only one child．There are lots of problems with these children，one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people．（高分句型一） Basically，when born in a family without siblings，a child is usually vain and arrogant，even sometimes indifferentand rebellious．All these disadvantages may contribute to unhappiness of his or her life．
       Recently a new policy has been adjusted nationwide，which allows a family to have two children．（高分句型二）ln the process of growing，the two can take care of each other，and share too much in common，which is beneficial to their character building and psychological health．（高分句型三）
        In my view，it is better to have two children in a family than only one．
                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．