Question

12．假設(shè)你是李華，有高中畢業(yè)后申請(qǐng)國(guó)外大學(xué)（如Harvard University等）的想法，但不夠確定，于是給你校外籍職業(yè)規(guī)劃顧問David寫郵件咨詢．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．申請(qǐng)?jiān)�因�?br />2．自身優(yōu)勢(shì)；
3．未來職業(yè)選擇的初步想法等．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給外籍職業(yè)規(guī)劃顧問David寫郵件咨詢高中畢業(yè)后申請(qǐng)國(guó)外大學(xué)，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：申請(qǐng)?jiān)�因；自身�?yōu)勢(shì)；未來職業(yè)選擇的初步想法等．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為申請(qǐng)國(guó)外大學(xué)的原因．第二部分為自身優(yōu)勢(shì)．第三部分為未來職業(yè)選擇的初步想法
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
apply for  申請(qǐng)…
be famous for 因…而出名
keep a balance保持平衡
 have a talent for 有天賦
高分句型一：As a Chinese high school student to graduate this year，I sincerely apply for a chance to study abroad..此句用了不定式to graduate作后置定語，表將來
高分句型二：I keep a balance among all the subjects，which makes me excellent in our school．此句用which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句

解答 Mr David，
As a Chinese high school student to graduate this year，I sincerely apply for a chance to study abroad（高分句型一）．It has been my dream all the time to study in your university，which is famous for its academic atmosphere．（申請(qǐng)國(guó)外大學(xué)的原因）
As a student with many hobbies such as reading books，playing basketball and chess．I keep a balance among all the subjects，which makes me excellent in our school（高分句型二）．I go in for various out-of-class activities．I like playing football，table tennis，and so on I'm also a member of many clubs for music and opera．In addition，I'm easy to get along with and ready to help others in trouble．I'm a volunteer in my neighborhood．Besides，I have a talent for English，and I won first prize in the English Speech Contest in my province last year．I can communicate fluently with native speakers in English．I believe I can adjust myself to the new environment soon．（自身優(yōu)勢(shì)）
I'd appreciate it if I could be admittedI want to be a translator．I'm looking forward to your reply And please contact me by e-mail：lihuaqq．（未來職業(yè)選擇的初步想法）
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．