Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

Without pain and struggle, life is never complete and successful, just as without amounts of suffering and struggle in cocoon(繭)，a butter can never fly.

注意：1．無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語。     2．除詩歌外，文體不限。

3．內容必須結合生活中的一個事例。       4．詞數(shù)為120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Writing：One possible version

  The road of life is never straight and smooth. It is our attitude towards the pain and difficulties that determines how far we can go.

  Playing the violin was once my dream, but for lack of practice and playing skills. I did very badly in the beginning, so I was often teased by other students. Gradually, I lost confidence in myself and I wanted to give up the violin. But my teacher told me: “Nothing is easy. Pain and struggle are the vital parts of our life.” Hearing that, I pushed myself harder to practise it. Little by little, I made progress. Eventually I won the first place in a violin competition. For the first time, I tasted the flavor of success after my struggle.

   From my experience I’ve learnt the lesson that it is pain and struggle that lead us to success. Whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we don’t give up and learn from our mistakes, we are sure to succeed.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇給出簡單漢語提示的議論文類書面表達。本文近似于命題作文。文章給出的漢語提示，只是定出了文章的主要論調。要想寫好這類作文，考生必須充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，打開文章的思路，使其有血有肉。文章成文時應注意：1.三段成文法。（1）第一段引出文章的主題；（2）用生活中的實例闡明主題觀點；（3）總結全文，得出結論。2.人稱：第一人稱；3.時態(tài)：敘述過去的實例用一般過去時，論述自己的觀點用一般現(xiàn)在時。4.適當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢，渾然一體；5.恰當使用高級詞匯、短語和句型，以通過文章的檔次。

【亮點說明】范文亮點1.使用了強調句型：It is our attitude towards the pain and difficulties that determines how far we can go. Whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we don’t give up and learn from our mistakes, we are sure to succeed.2.使用非謂語動詞短語：Hearing that, I pushed myself harder to practise it.3.短語：for lack of；give up；little by little；be faced with; be sure to do.

考點：考查議論文的寫作。