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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Chris,

I learn that some people laugh at me for being overweight. Don’t be so worried about your figure.

I know a group calling HOOP from the Internet, which is established to be the voice of the overweight persons. It made up of a group of friendly and supportive people, all understanding the struggle of being overweight. So you will not feel lonely when you exercise. There are a plenty of activities and trainer who don’t push you to do what you dislike. With their support and encourage it’s easy for you to leave your comfort zone and try something new.

I would high recommend HOOP to you. Whether it’s to complete a personal challenge and start a healthier lifestyle, HOOP can really help you become the best version of you. Although you keep exercising, your figure will be good than before. Best wishes!

Yours,

Vivian

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】作者講述了加入HOOP組織鍛煉減肥的經(jīng)歷和收獲。

1.me→you.考查代詞。此處是給朋友Chris的信，別人嘲笑Chris因?yàn)樗�胖。指�?/span>Chris用you,故me→you.

2. calling →called.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句中a group和動(dòng)詞call是被動(dòng)關(guān)系用過去分詞表被動(dòng)，指這個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)被叫做HOOP.故calling →called.

3.it后加is/was.考查動(dòng)詞。此處指HOOP由一群友好支持的人組成，此處表被動(dòng)，be made up of“由…組成”，故it后加is/was.

4.去掉a.考查固定短語。plenty of “許多，大量”是固定短語，前面不加冠詞a，故去掉a.

5. trainer →trainers.考查名詞。根據(jù)There are 和 plenty of可知都表示復(fù)數(shù)，名詞也用復(fù)數(shù)。故trainer →trainers.

6. encourage →encouragement.考查名詞。由their修飾，和and前的support并列用名詞，故encourage →encouragement.

7. high →highly.考查副詞。此處修飾動(dòng)詞 recommend用副詞，表示強(qiáng)力推薦，故high →highly.

8. and →or.考查連詞。此處指是要完成個(gè)人挑戰(zhàn)還是開始一個(gè)更健康的生活方式，Whether …or…表示“是…還是…”，故and →or.

9. Although →Once/If/When.考查連詞。此處指一旦/如果/當(dāng)你不斷地鍛煉時(shí)，你的體形會(huì)比以前好許多。不是“盡管”應(yīng)該用“一旦/如果/當(dāng)…時(shí)”，故Although →Once/If/When.

10.good→better.考查形容詞最高級。根據(jù)句中than before可知是含有比較的意思，指比以前更好，所以用比較級。故good→better.