Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

There are many hurricanes occur around the world every year. Knowing what to do during a hurricane is of great important to survive.

Listening to the weather forecast so that you know when a hurricane is coming. If a hurricane warning is issued, stop doing whatever you’re busy with, which is always the most efficient way to avoid caught in a hurricane. If you were walking outside, stop and find a shelter under which can protect you from a hurricane. If you are in your car when a hurricane comes, remain in it and turn on the engine, waiting until the hurricane dies down. If you are inside your house, do remember to close the windows and doors until you are sure when the wind is not that strong enough to blow it open.

Answer 1

【答案】1. occur→occurring

2. important→importance

3. Listening→Listen

4. which→whichever

5. avoid后面加being

6. were→are

7. under去掉

8. on→off

9. when→that

10. it→them

【解析】每年都有許多颶風(fēng)在世界各地發(fā)生。知道在颶風(fēng)中如何做對生存非常重要。

1.occur改為occuring

考查非謂語作定語。occur與所修飾的名詞 hurricanes在邏輯上是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，要用現(xiàn)在分詞作定語。

2.important 改為importance

考查固定搭配。 be of importance=be important 重要。 of+名詞相當(dāng)于這個(gè)名詞的形容詞。

3.listening改為listen。

考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)。Listen to the weather forecast so that you know when a hurricane is coming. 聽天氣預(yù)報(bào),這樣你就知道當(dāng)颶風(fēng)什么時(shí)候來臨。祈使句要用動(dòng)詞原形 。故要改為 listen。

4.whatever—whichever

考查名詞從句stop doing whatever you’re busy with.停止做你正在做的任何事。。 whatever沒有范圍的任何事 而whichever有范圍的。故whichever改為whatever。

考查 which whichever

5.being

考查固定搭配。 avoid doing sth.避免做某事。be caught in..被困于……，陷入……所以要加being。

6.were –are

考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)句意要用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)。

7去掉.under

考查定語從句。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)及句意來判斷，多了個(gè)under，故去掉。找一個(gè)可以讓你不受颶風(fēng)影響的shelter。

8.on改為off

考查固定搭配。根據(jù)此句句意：如果當(dāng)颶風(fēng)來了留在車?yán)锊㈥P(guān)掉引擎。turn on 打開，turn off 關(guān)掉。故on改為off。

9.when改為that when that

考查固定搭配。句意：,記得要關(guān)閉門窗,直到你確定風(fēng)并不足以打擊它打開。be sure that ……=make sure that…..確保，確定，確信。

10.it them it them