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1．學校將為高三學生舉辦一場英語沙龍．假如你是學生會主席李華，請根據以下提示準備一份英語發(fā)言稿，呼吁高三學生調節(jié)好學習和生活，保持良好的心態(tài)．
內容要點：（1）描述周圍同學現狀：熬夜多，運動少，學習效率不高．
（2）提出至少兩條建議．
注意：（1）詞數100左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Good morning，everyone!It's my honor to be here to make a short speech．Recently I have found that some of our classmates can't study effectively．Some can't help falling asleep in class，because they often study too late into the night．Others seldom have sports，which surely does harm to their health．
As we know，enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students．We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep，so we should try to make wise use of our time，striking a balance between work and leisure．Besides，doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot，keeping fit，reducing stress and so on．Let's spare some time to do all kinds of sports．And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well．That'sall．Thankyouforlistening!

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分析 本文是應用文，根據所給提示寫一份發(fā)言稿．呼吁高三學生調節(jié)好學習和生活，保持良好的心態(tài)．寫作要點：（1）描述周圍同學現狀：熬夜多，運動少，學習效率不高．（2）提出至少兩條建議．屬提綱作文．在寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般現在時為主．重要短語：make a speech （做演講…），can't help doing （禁不住，忍不住做某事），late into the night （到深夜），do harm to（對…有害），be of great importance （重要），make use of （利用），spare some time（抽出時間）．

解答 Good morning，everyone！It's my honor to be here to make a short speech．Recently I have found that some of our classmates can't study effectively．Some can't help falling asleep in class，because they often study too late into the night．Others seldom have sports，which surely does harm to their health．【高分句型】（周圍同學現狀）
As we know，enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students．We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep，so we should try to make wise use of our time，striking a balance between work and leisure．【高分句型】Besides，doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot，keeping fit，reducing stress and so on．【高分句型】Let's spare some time to do all kinds of sports．And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well．【高分句型】（提出建議）
      That's all．Thank you for listening!

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．