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8．Through the wonders of modern technology，our world is more connected than ever before．Ideas can cross oceans with the click of a button．Companies can do business and compete with companies across the globe．And we can text，email，Skype with people on every continent．
So studying abroad isn't just a fun way to spend a semester； it is quickly becoming the key to success in our global economy．Because getting ahead in today's work places isn't just about getting good grades or test scores in school，which are important．It's also about having real experience with the world beyond your borders--experience with languages，cultures and societies very different from your own．Or，as the Chinese saying goes："It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books．"
But let's be clear，studying abroad is about so much more than improving your own future．It's also about shaping the future of your countries and of the world we all share．Because when it comes to the defining challenges of our time--whether it's climate change or economic opportunity or the spread of nuclear weapons--these are shared challenges．And no one country can confront them alone．The only way forward is together．
（Adapted from US First Lady Michelle's speech in Peking University）
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；
2．然后以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓?讀萬卷書，不如行萬里路"的看法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你如何理解這一說法？
（2）你是否認(rèn)同這種說法？為什么？
（3）針對這一說法，作為中學(xué)生，你會怎么做？

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：experience sth （體驗(yàn)，經(jīng)歷某事），benefit sb/sth（對某人/物有益），make a speech（作演講），highlight sth（強(qiáng)調(diào)，突出某事），be for…（贊成…），gain knowledge（獲得知識），put sth into practice （付諸實(shí)施），be different from（與…不同），contact sb（持有一個正確的態(tài)度），acquire sth （獲得…），live a better life（過更好的生活）．
【高分句型一】
1．In the modern world with a closer link，①to experience different cultures and societies is②what studying abroad is more about，③which may benefit both the individual's future and the future of the country．
①此處是"動詞不定式（to do）"作主語．
②此處是由連接代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的表語從句．
③此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型二】
2．This saying highlights the importance of traveling，①which means ②if one wants to understand people and the world profoundly，traveling is a better way than just reading books directly．
①此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．
②此處是賓語從句中又含有"if"條件狀語從句，主句為"traveling is a better way than just reading books directly"．
【高分句型三】
3．I am strongly for this idea，which is really meaningful and helpful to us．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型四】
4．Not until we experience in person do we realize that the world is not as pure and simple as we think．
此處是由部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，結(jié)構(gòu)為"Not until+句子/時間副詞+一般疑問句形式"，意為"直到…才…"．
【高分句型五】
5．we can travel to other places personally，contacting different people，experiencing various cultures，learning different languages．
此處為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語，主句為"we can travel to other places personally"，主句的主語與動詞"contact，experience"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．

解答 In the modern world with a closer link，to experience different cultures and societies is what studying abroad is more about，which may benefit both the individual's future and the future of the country．【高分句型一】（概括）
In her speech made in Peking University，Michelle mentioned a famous Chinese saying："It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books．"This saying highlights the importance of traveling，which means if one wants to understand people and the world profoundly，traveling is a better way than just reading books directly．【高分句型二】（如何理解這一說法）
I am strongly for this idea，which is really meaningful and helpful to us．【高分句型三】As we know，we gain knowledge from books，and put them into practice finally．Yet most of time，we find that the knowledge of the book is quite different from that of reality．Traveling can tell us the truth，helping us learn the world more clearly．Sometimes，what the books tell us is rather idealized．Not until we experience in person do we realize that the world is not as pure and simple as we think．【高分句型四】（贊同這一說法及原因）
As students，we of course should read as much as we can，but meanwhile if possible，we can travel to other places personally，contacting different people，experiencing various cultures，learning different languages．【高分句型五】These may not be acquired by reading，but can help us understand the world better and live a better life in the future．（個人觀點(diǎn)：針對這一說法，作為中學(xué)生，該怎么做）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．