Question

第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿(mǎn)分25分)
假設(shè)你叫李華，是一家英文雜志社的心理咨詢(xún)師。某中學(xué)生小王給你寫(xiě)信，提到自己體型偏胖，想節(jié)食減肥，征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你給她回一封信，談?wù)勀銓?duì)該問(wèn)題的見(jiàn)解。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
I．健康比漂亮重要；
2．學(xué)生以學(xué)習(xí)為主，不要過(guò)于注重外貌和別人的看法；
3．可通過(guò)多鍛煉身體保持健康，要改變不良的飲食習(xí)慣；
4．健康的心態(tài)也很重要。
注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)100左右，其中開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．參考詞匯：state of mind心態(tài)
Dear Xiao Wang，
I have received and read your letter，in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by  dieting．
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Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Xiao Wang，
I have received and read your letter，in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by  dieting．
It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful 。However，in my opinion，health is more important than beauty。For a student ，studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second 。So do not let others' opinions affect your normal life 。However，if you do want to diet ，it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits。The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind ，as it will help with your studies ，and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting。
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I look forward to your next letter 。
Yours，
Li hua

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