分析 本文是一篇提綱作文.根據(jù)所提供的材料信息,寫一篇短文,陳述對自己的成長起著很大影響的家庭、學(xué)校、社會、朋友、書籍、名人等諸多因素中的兩個或三個及理由.
寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主.
寫作要點:1.選擇并陳述對你的成長起著很大影響的家庭、學(xué)校、社會、朋友、書籍、名人等諸多因素中的兩個或三個; 2.談?wù)勀愕目捶ê屠碛桑?br />重要短語:write to sb(寫信給某人),a common phenomenon(一個常見的現(xiàn)象),draw sth to the public attention (引起某人的關(guān)注),wait for (等候),be addicted to(上癮),ignore sb (忽略某人),be used for(被用于),keep in touch with sb(與某人保持聯(lián)系),be engaged in(忙于),fail to do(沒能做某事),communicate with(與…交流),help sb
with sth (幫助某人某物),care about sth(關(guān)心某事).
【高分句型一】
1.①As is often the case,②when people are having meals,③waiting for buses or even walking along streets,they are always addicted to their phones,heads hanging down,completely ignoring others.
①此處是關(guān)系代詞"as"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,關(guān)系代詞"that"在從句中作主語,意為"正如",主句為"they are always addicted to their phones,heads hanging down,completely ignoring others".
②此處是時間狀語從句.
③此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語.
【高分句型二】
2.The reason for the increasing number of phubbings everywhere is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything,such as playing mobile games,shopping online and keeping in touch with friends through QQ.
此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的表語從句,結(jié)構(gòu)為"The reason for sth is that+從句",意為"某事的原因是…".
【高分句型三】
3.Moreover,people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them.
此處是由"過去分詞短語"作名詞"people"的后置定語,可以理解為"people who are engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them",句子的謂語動詞為"fail to communicate well with",賓語為"those around them".
解答 Dear editor,
I'm writing to you about a common phenomenon to draw it to the public attention.(目的)
As is often the case,when people are having meals,waiting for buses or even walking along streets,they are always addicted to their phones,heads hanging down,completely ignoring others.【高分句型一】(描述現(xiàn)象)
The reason for the increasing number of phubbings everywhere is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything,such as playing mobile games,shopping online and keeping in touch with friends through QQ.【高分句型二】However,too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety.Moreover,people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them.【高分句型三】(分析其原因及弊端)
Personally,people should wisely use their phones to help with their work and study.Meanwhile they'd better care more about their family and friends rather than phones.(如何改變現(xiàn)狀)
Best wishes to you!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時需注意積累短語和重要句型.
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