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時(shí)下，很多學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)。為此，某英語報(bào)在你校組織了一場討論。討論的主題：中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機(jī)去學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。

大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為	大多數(shù)老師認(rèn)為：	你的觀點(diǎn)：
可方便與家長、同學(xué)聯(lián)系；是一種時(shí)尚。	中學(xué)生年齡尚小，還不能自控；用手機(jī)玩游戲，發(fā)短信浪費(fèi)時(shí)間；容易引起攀比。如需要打電話學(xué)校里有各種電話可供使用。	追求時(shí)尚可以理解， 但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)。

注意：

1．信的開頭已為你寫好。

2．詞數(shù)：100左右。

3．參考詞匯：攀比：vie with…  在校園內(nèi)：on the campus

Dear editor:

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

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Answer 1

Dear editor:

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone. And what’s more, it’s a fashion.

However, most teachers think that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. And it’s easy to cause the students to vie with each other. If necessary they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.

In my opinion, following the fashion is understandable. But as middle school students, we should put all our heart into our studies.

                                              Yours truly

                                                   Li Hua

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解析:

提綱式作文和書信體結(jié)合，寫全羅列內(nèi)容，用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞形成一篇渾然一體的短文，本文講清人們對(duì)學(xué)生帶手機(jī)的看法以及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。