Question

8．假如你是李華，你校的交換學(xué)生Brown明天將結(jié)束兩個(gè)月的學(xué)習(xí)回英國(guó)．現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你代表班上的師生，根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿．
要點(diǎn)：
1．簡(jiǎn)評(píng)布朗的為人和學(xué)習(xí)；
2．回憶和布朗相處的情況；
3．表達(dá)對(duì)布朗離別的心情；
4．對(duì)布朗回家的美好祝愿．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
參考詞匯：代表：on behalf of
Dear friends'
How time flies！____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇發(fā)言稿，屬于應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作范疇．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要寫(xiě)全要點(diǎn)，包括：簡(jiǎn)評(píng)，回憶，心情，祝愿；其次要注意發(fā)言稿的口語(yǔ)話(huà)特點(diǎn)；最后要注意時(shí)態(tài)．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
leave for 動(dòng)身去某地
care for 關(guān)心
part from sb 和某人分離
say goodbye to sb 向某人道別
It is two months since Brown came to our school．
it is+時(shí)間段+since從句，從…時(shí)候開(kāi)始已經(jīng)多久了．
he has studied very diligently and is always ready to help others when necessary．
句中when連接省略的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，省略了it is．
I still remember those beautiful days we spent together，during which time we often helped and cared for each other．
句中we spent together修飾名詞days，是一個(gè)限制性定語(yǔ)從句；during which time是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
May our friendship last forever!
may sth/sb do祝福語(yǔ)句型．

解答 Dear friends，
    How time flies!It is two months since Brown came to our school．（高分句型一）Tomorrow he will leave for home．【說(shuō)明事實(shí)】
    Brown is an exchange student from Britain．During his short stay in our class，he has studied very diligently and is always ready to help others when necessary．（高分句型二）Everybody says he is a nice boy．I still remember those beautiful days we spent together，during which time we often helped and cared for each other．（高分句型三） Today，we really hate to part from him．How we wish he would stay here longer!【評(píng)價(jià)和回憶】
    Now，the time has come for us to say goodbye to him．Please allow me，on behalf of all the teachers and classmates，to wish him a pleasant journey home and good health．May our friendship last forever!（高分句型四）【心情和祝�！�
Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．