Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

On December 10th last year, we paid a visit to a high-tech agricultural garden. It took us one and a half hour to get there. The naturally environment there was very pleased, and we could breathe fresh air. The intelligent glass greenhouse, where many kinds of fruits and vegetables were growing there, was really amazing. Because it was very cold outside, the greenhouse controlling by a computer could provide a proper temperature. That was also very interesting to see so many colorful fruits and vegetables in the greenhouse which we have never seen before. Luckily, we allowed to taste some of the fruits and vegetables. We really had a good time and learned a lot over the visit.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】hour--- hours

【2】naturally--- natural

【3】pleased--- pleasing / pleasant

【4】去掉growing there中的there

【5】Because--- Though / Although / While

【6】 controlling--- controlled

【7】That--- It

【8】have--- had

【9】we ∧ allowed加were

【10】over--- from

【解析】

試題分析：本文介紹高科技的農(nóng)業(yè)園。

【1】hour--- hours 句意：一個(gè)半小時(shí)，故把hour--- hours。

【2】naturally--- natural 形容詞修飾名詞，故把naturally--- natural。

【3】pleased--- pleasing / pleasant 句意：那里的環(huán)境是令人愉悅的。故把pleased--- pleasing / pleasant。

【4】去掉growing there中的there 此處是where引導(dǎo)的定語從句，故去掉growing there中的there。

【5】Because--- Though / Although / While 句意：盡管外面天很冷，電腦控制的溫室里的溫度是合適的。故把Because--- Though / Although / While。

【6】 controlling--- controlled 句意：被電腦控制的溫室。過去分詞作后置定語，故把controlling--- controlled。

【7】That--- It 句意：看到這么多五彩繽紛的水果和蔬菜是非常有趣的。在這里it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式，故把That--- It。

【8】have--- had 句意：來這之前從來沒見過。根據(jù)句意可知用過去完成時(shí)態(tài)，故把have--- had。

【9】we ∧ allowed加were 固定結(jié)構(gòu)：be allowed to do sth.被允許做某事，故在we ∧ allowed加were。

【10】over--- from 固定搭配：learn sth.from從---學(xué)到，故把over--- from。

【知識(shí)拓展】

1.動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語補(bǔ)足語

encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵(lì)某人做某事；want sb. to do 想讓某人做某事；invite sb. to do邀請(qǐng)某人做某事； ask sb. to do 請(qǐng)求某人做某事；order sb. to do命令某人做某事； tell sb. to do告訴某人做某事；force sb. to do 強(qiáng)迫某人做某事；allow sb. to do允許某人做某事； forbid sb. to do 禁止某人做某事；persuade sb. to do 勸說某人做某事。

2.不帶to 的動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語補(bǔ)足語

have/make/see/watch/hear/let/notice/observe/feel/look at/listen to sb. do sth.

注意：help sb. (to) do sth.

溫馨提示：不帶to 的動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語補(bǔ)足語，但是變成被動(dòng)語態(tài)時(shí)要把to加上。He made me feel at home. （主動(dòng)語態(tài)）I was made to feel at home.（被動(dòng)語態(tài)）