Question

假如你是高中一年級(jí)新生李華。開(kāi)學(xué)之初，你的英語(yǔ)老師Rita 希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封信。
1.對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；2.自己目前的英語(yǔ)水平；3.自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問(wèn)題；4.對(duì)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。
Dear Rita,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Rita,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
With the development of science and technology, the world is becoming a global village; so English is getting more and more important. What’s more, only by having a good command of English can we see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. As a result, I’m not as active as other students in English class.
I’d be grateful if you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I do believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文。假如你是高中一年級(jí)新生李華。開(kāi)學(xué)之初，你的英語(yǔ)老師Rita 希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封信。1.對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；2.自己目前的英語(yǔ)水平；3.自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問(wèn)題；4.對(duì)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議。所以要用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】only by having a good command of English can we see the world through a new window.這個(gè)句子用了部分倒裝，My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,這個(gè)句子用了表語(yǔ)從句，I’d be grateful if you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.這個(gè)句子用了賓語(yǔ)從句。