Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,為校刊“英語(yǔ)園地” 寫(xiě)一篇短文,講述上周你校高三年級(jí)舉行趣味運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的過(guò)程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞:趣味運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)fun sports meeting 二人三足 three-legged race

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, our grade held a fun sports meeting aiming to relieve us senior three students from pressure and heavy school work.

On Monday morning, we were told that a fun sports meeting would be held on the school playground on Friday afternoon. Upon hearing the news, I, together with my best friend, registered for the three-legged race excitedly.

The three-legged race required effective cooperation between teammates. Thus, during the following days, we practised the game after school. Under the guidance of our classmate, we mastered the skills and got prepared.

Then came the big day. With my left foot and my friend's right foot tied together, we set out quickly as soon as our PE teacher blew his whistle. Arm in arm, we managed to run fast at the same pace. The playground was filled with our schoolmate’s laughter and cheers. A few minutes later, we crossed the finishing line. We did a really good job and won the first prize. Standing on the platform, we felt proud and excited with the thunderous applause from our classmates.

By getting involved in the game, we got not only a little leisure from our busy school life but the joy of working together with others.

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖畫(huà)作文。要求學(xué)生一篇短文，講述上周你校高三年級(jí)舉行趣味運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的過(guò)程。

第一步：審題

體裁：記敘文。

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

1. 講述上周你校高三年級(jí)舉行趣味運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的過(guò)程。

2. 詞數(shù)不少于60。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)）

aiming to；registered for；filled with；felt proud and excited；getting involved in

第三步：連詞成句

1.Last week, our grade held a fun sports meeting aiming to relieve us senior three students from pressure and heavy school work.

2. Upon hearing the news, I, together with my best friend, registered for the three-legged race excitedly.

3. The playground was filled with our schoolmate’s laughter and cheers.

4. Standing on the platform, we felt proud and excited with the thunderous applause from our classmates.

5. By getting involved in the game, we got not only a little leisure from our busy school life but the joy of working together with others.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間；活動(dòng)的地點(diǎn)；活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容；活動(dòng)的意義

2. 表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Upon ；together with；Thus

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改