Question

（全國卷I海南、寧夏） 書面表達(dá)

假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs Wilson 不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請(qǐng)給Mrs Wilson 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：

1．外出購物

2．替房東還書

3．Tracy 來電話留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）見面取消

2）此事已告知Susan

3) 盡快回電

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 Mrs Wilson,

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Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Mrs Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Li Hua

【解析】作文題仍然同去年一樣，屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，要求學(xué)生就所給內(nèi)容寫一張留言條，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活型的原則。應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1）注意人稱，應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給房東（第二人稱）寫便條；2）注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用：從試題的內(nèi)容上可以看出在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)1和2時(shí)應(yīng)用將來時(shí)；而要點(diǎn)3中的幾個(gè)方面則需要注意時(shí)態(tài)的替換，會(huì)用到一般過去時(shí)，現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)。3）注意恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，是各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。