Question

1．假設(shè)你是某大學(xué)的學(xué)生李津，你校英語(yǔ)俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席，負(fù)責(zé)規(guī)劃、組織俱樂部的相關(guān)活動(dòng)，你欲參選，請(qǐng)按以下提示，寫一篇競(jìng)選演講稿．
•個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹（如性格、特長(zhǎng)等）
•組織校內(nèi)的活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦講座、英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)等）
•組織校際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦辯論賽、演講比賽等）
•表達(dá)競(jìng)選的愿望．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校姓名
（3）可適當(dāng)?shù)募尤爰?xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；
（4）開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
副主席：vice president
競(jìng)選：run for
Good afternoon，my dear friends，
My name is Li Jin，I feel excited to have the honor of running for vice president of our English Club．I think I am fully qualified for the job．
Firstly，I am easygoing and can communicate with others in English fluently．Secondly，as a dynamic person，I have rich experience in organizing activities，such as English parties and all kinds of lectures．I will make good plans and spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools by holding English Speech Competition and debates if I get the chance．If I am lucky enough to be elected，I will make great contributions to serve students and try to make their life more colorful!I sincerely hope you can give me a chance．
Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇競(jìng)選演講稿，參選校英語(yǔ)俱樂部新一屆副主席．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹（如性格、特長(zhǎng)等）；2．組織校內(nèi)的活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦講座、英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)等）；3．組織校際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦辯論賽、演講比賽等）；4．表達(dá)競(jìng)選的愿望．
重要短語(yǔ)：have the honor of …（有幸做某事），run for（參加…競(jìng)選），be qualified for（能勝任…），communicate with sb （與某人交際），have rich experience in （有豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn)），all kinds of （各種各樣的），spare no efforts（不遺余力），make great contributions to…（做貢獻(xiàn)），serve sb （服務(wù)于某人），try to do （努力做某事），make one's life more colorful（使某人的生活更豐富），be enough to do （足夠做某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．I will make good plans and spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools by holding English Speech Competition and debates if I get the chance．
此處是由連詞"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為"I will make good plans and spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools by holding English Speech Competition and debates"，主句中"and"連接兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)作"make good plans"和"spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools"．
【高分句型二】
2．If I am lucky enough to be elected，I will make great contributions to serve students and try to make their life more colorful!
此處是由連詞"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為"I will make great contributions to serve students and try to make their life more colorful"．

解答 Good afternoon，my dear friends，
      My name is Li Jin．I feel excited to have the honor of running for vice president of our English Club．I think I am fully qualified for the job．Firstly，I am easygoing and can communicate with others in English fluently．Secondly，as a dynamic person，I have rich experience in organizing activities，such as  English parties and all kinds of lectures．（個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹（如性格、特長(zhǎng)等））
I will make good plans and spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools by holding English Speech Competition and debates if I get the chance．【高分句型一】（組織校內(nèi)的活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)等）、組織校際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦辯論賽、等））
 If I am lucky enough to be elected，I will make great contributions to serve students and try to make their life more colorful!【高分句型二】I sincerely hope you can give me a chance．Thank you!（表達(dá)競(jìng)選的愿望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．