Question

我校與韓國某中學(xué)是友好學(xué)校，對方校刊來信想了解我校本學(xué)期選修課開設(shè)情況。請根據(jù)下表提供的學(xué)生問卷調(diào)查得到的信息，用英語寫一篇報導(dǎo)。

課程門類	上課時間	最受歡迎的課	對課程的看法	建  議
二十余種 (學(xué)生可任選)	每周三和周五 下午 3:30—4:50	計算機 英語口語 藝術(shù)等	1．十分感興趣 2．學(xué)到許多課外 的知識 3．有大量的實踐 機會	1．增加選修課 2．減少作業(yè)量 3．多組織參觀， 了解社會

要求：1．報導(dǎo)需包括表內(nèi)提供的所有內(nèi)容。2．詞數(shù)100--120左右。報導(dǎo)題目已給出。

詞匯：optional course 選修課

Students Like Optional Courses

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Students Like Optional Courses

This term our school has offered more than 20 optional courses, from which students can choose. The courses are given from 3:30pm to 4:50pm on Wednesday and Friday every week. And we students have benefited a lot from them.

In our school, students take great interest in the optional courses. Their favorites are computer, spoken English, arts and so on. They say they have learned much that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of practice. However, students are not quite satisfied. They hope more optional courses will be offered while their home-work should be less. They suggest that more trips and visits should be organized. Only in this way can they learn more about what is going on outside school. （126 words）

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，，要點都已經(jīng)給出，要求關(guān)于選修課開設(shè)情況寫一篇報導(dǎo)，根據(jù)下表提供的學(xué)生問卷調(diào)查得到的信息寫作，并同時提出自己建議。包括1．課程門類；2．上課時間； 3．最受歡迎的課；4.對課程的看法審題時注意本文使用的時態(tài)，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調(diào)句型準確表述。如范文里面的They say they have learned much that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of practice..和Only in this way can they learn more about what is going on outside school.還有要用適當?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來：象however,等等。

考點：考查提綱類短文寫作。

點評：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。