Question

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，為�？�英語(yǔ)園地寫(xiě)一篇題為“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過(guò)程。
注意.詞數(shù)不少于60.
提示詞.游樂(lè)園amusement park  垃圾 litter  可回收的垃圾箱 recycling bin
不可回收的垃圾箱non-recycling bin

Our Spring Outing

Answer 1

Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.

試題分析：本文屬于看圖作文比較好寫(xiě)的題目。首先對(duì)第一幅圖的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，說(shuō)明我們開(kāi)班會(huì)討論的內(nèi)容及同學(xué)們各自的想法such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park.最終是決定去登山go mountain climbing.然后說(shuō)明我們很早出發(fā)去爬山，當(dāng)?shù)竭_(dá)山頂時(shí)被美景吸引但是也看到了垃圾到處都是we were shocked to see litter here and there,最后我們開(kāi)始撿垃圾，將不同的垃圾繼續(xù)分類(lèi)，分別放入可回收的垃圾箱和不可回收的垃圾箱中we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.最后一句話(huà)結(jié)尾很累但是非常的高興即可We were tired but happy.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的寫(xiě)作不難，對(duì)于敘事類(lèi)文體，對(duì)文章的條理性要把握好，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程注意使用“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的詞語(yǔ)或是句型表達(dá)，多使用被動(dòng)，倒裝、虛擬來(lái)提升作文的美度。在平時(shí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫(xiě)的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。