Question

14．假設(shè)你目前在英國參加語言培訓(xùn)班，住在Mrs．William家．你需要完成培訓(xùn)老師布置的作業(yè)：用英語描述你的房東．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．外貌特征；
2．容易相處；
3．對中國感興趣．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：l20詞左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
I'm now staying at Mrs．William's．         ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇記敘文，要求描述自己的房東或房東太太．內(nèi)容包括：外貌特征；和藹友善的性格，相處融洽的關(guān)系；經(jīng)常照顧你的日常生活，如：洗衣等；對中國的歷史文化很感興趣；再根據(jù)自己的觀點(diǎn)，來發(fā)表一下自己對房東或房東太太的看法．描述人物用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；第三人稱．常用到描述人物的詞語有：be friendly to；get on well with； be interested in等．
She is of normal height by the western standard，with a slender figure，blond hair and big blue eyes．（高分句式一）
She usually wears a smile on her face and that makes her even more attractive．（高分句式二）
What's more，she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．（高分句式三）

解答 One possible version：
      I am now staying at Mrs．William's．She is said to be in her forties but looks much younger．She is of normal height by the western standard，with a slender figure，blond hair and big blue eyes．（高分句式一）She usually wears a smile on her face and that makes her even more attractive．（高分句式二）（簡單描述）
I really like this outgoing woman．We get along well with each other．She always takes care of my daily life．She cooks and washes clothes for me．That makes me feel like at home．What's more，she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．（高分句式三）So she often reads books about China．She hope to visit China one day．I think If she comes to China，she must love our beautuful country．And she can visit some places of interest and meet some friendly Chinese．（對中國感興趣）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．