Question

18．下面短文中有10處語言錯誤．請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在下面加上該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分
This summer holiday，which I'm looking forward for，is coming．What great fun that it is to go fishing!Play football is one of my hobby．I can ride my bike，climb high mountains，and go swimming．Sometimes I can play chess with your grandfather．How interested my holiday will be!But my father was always afraid I might be hurt：drop from water，fall off a tree，hurt by a truck or something．But if I'm careless enough，how will these things happen？I must try best to persuade him．

Answer 1

分析 我期待的暑假就要來到了．我可以去釣魚，踢足球，騎自行車，爬山等，我還可以和爺爺下象棋，但是爸爸卻擔(dān)心我會受到傷害，落水，從樹上掉下來，被車撞到等其他事情，但是如果我足夠細心，怎么會發(fā)生這些事情呢？我會盡力說服他的．

解答 This summer holiday，which I'm looking forward for，is coming．What great fun that it is to go fishing!Play football is one of my hobby．I can ride my bike，climb high mountains，and go swimming．Sometimes I can play chess with your grandfather．How interested my holiday will be!But my father was always afraid I might be hurt：drop from water，fall off a tree，∧hurt by a truck or something．But if I'm careless enough，how will these things happen？I must try∧best to persuade him．
詳解：
1．for改為to；考查固定搭配，look forward to 是固定短語，意為"期待…"．
2．去掉that；考查感嘆句，What great fun  it is to go fishing！是一個感嘆句型，這里it作形式主語，真正的主語是不定式短語，在句中what是一個多余成分，所以去掉．
3．Play 改為Playing；考查非謂語動詞，這里用動名詞形式在句中作主語．
4．hobby改為hobbies；考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，one of 后面要跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式表示一個范圍．
5．your改為my；考查人稱代詞，結(jié)合上下文分析句意應(yīng)為"有時我可以和爺爺下象棋"，所以此處應(yīng)該用人稱代詞my．
6．interested改為interesting；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞作形容詞修飾物，過去分詞作形容詞修飾人，這里修飾holiday，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作形容詞．
7．was改為is；考查動詞的時態(tài)，結(jié)合上下文分析，此處應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時陳述一個事實情況．
8．hurt前面加be；考查被動語態(tài)，I和動詞hurt是被動關(guān)系，故前面加be構(gòu)成被動語態(tài)．
9．careless改為careful；考查句意，分析句意應(yīng)為"但是如果我足夠細心，怎么會發(fā)生這些事情呢"，所以這里用careful．
10．best前面加my；考查固定搭配，try one's best 是固定搭配，意為"盡某人最大的努力"．

點評 通過快速閱讀短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，從詞義，詞性，固定短語，句式結(jié)構(gòu)等方面去找文中存在的錯誤加以修改．