Question

假設你是李華，請根據以下表格為英文報紙Teens寫一篇評論，陳述你的觀點。

報紙的優(yōu)點	學生最喜愛欄目	兩點建議
①了解很多信息，如音樂、文學、教育、體育、科技等。 ② 經常閱讀該報，增長知識、拓寬視野、提高英語水平。	①名稱：Help ②原因：幫助解決學習和生活上的問題。	① 開設環(huán)境教育欄目，介紹環(huán)境保護方面的知識。 ②......

注意：
①詞數(shù)120左右。
②短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
③參考詞匯：文學literature；拓寬視野broaden one’s horizons；欄目column
Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can...
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I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future!

Answer 1

Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can get information about a lot of things such as music, literature, education, sports, science and technology. And all articles are written in excellent English. Therefore, by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. The students’ favourite column is Help because it can help them work out problems on their study or life.
I’d like to make two suggestions for the newspaper. First, it can start a new column named Environmental Education to introduce knowledge on how to protect the environment. Second, it may be a good idea for the newspaper to organize some reading competitions. I’m sure it will encourage more students to read Teens.
I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future!

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：為英文報紙Teens寫一篇評論，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，這篇文章的提綱很詳細，根據所給提綱，以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】這篇范文使用了一些短語：broaden their horizons,開闊視野， encourage … to鼓勵某人做…work out 算出，解決，還有句式也富有變化：And all articles are written in excellent English. by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. 這句話用了not only..but also…結構， it can start a new column named Environmental Education to introduce knowledge on how to protect the environment.這句話用了不定式做目的狀語和賓語， it may be a good idea for the newspaper to organize some reading competitions.這句話用了it做形式主語，還有文章還使用了Therefore,First, Second,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。