Question

12．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
第一節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)
Dear Brad，
I'm very glad to hear from you．In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China．Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group．Comparing with our parents，life for us is getting much hard．The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford．Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car．Therefore，I don't think love built on house and cars is true love，and I doubt how long it will last．
As a matter of fact，though situations are tough today，a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life．I believe we will have a nice future．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 親愛的布蘭迪，很高興收到你的來信．你在信中詢問中國80后的問題，我就是這個(gè)群體中的一員．與我們的父母比起來，我們的生活更難了．工作難找，房價(jià)奇高．很多女孩子都愿意嫁個(gè)有房有車的，我卻認(rèn)為建立在房子和車子上的愛情不是真愛，我懷疑這種愛情能否持久．盡管生活不容易，我們很多80后還是在努力過上好的生活，相信我們的未來是美好的．

解答 Dear Brad，
I'm very glad to hear from you．In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China．
                                                                                asked
Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group．Comparing with our parents，life for us is getting much hard．
                     a                                                    Compared                                                                  harder
The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford．Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car．
                                                            expensive                                                                   去掉
Therefore，I don't think love built on house and cars is true love，and I doubt how long it will last．
However                                           houses
As a matter of fact，though situations are tough today，a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts∧live a good life．I believe we will have a nice future．
                                                                                              us                                                加to
Li Hua．
1．a(chǎn)sk改為asked．句意表達(dá)的是過去，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
2．the改為a．句意表達(dá)的是泛指，不能用定冠詞．
3．Comparing改為Compared．句中compare與life之間構(gòu)成動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，要用被動(dòng)．
4．hard改為harder．句意表達(dá)的是暗含比較，和我們的父母比起來，我們的生活更艱難了．
5．expensively改為expensive．句中expensive是作系動(dòng)詞的表語，要用形容詞．
6．with去掉．marry是及物動(dòng)詞，表示嫁或娶，不需要加介詞．
7．Therefore改為However．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折，不是因果．
8．house改為houses．句中house是可數(shù)名詞，不能單獨(dú)使用．句意表達(dá)的是泛指，和cars并列，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
9．we改為us．句中是作介詞of的賓語，要用賓格．
10．加to．短語搭配，make great efforts to do sth努力做某事，不定式表達(dá)目的．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．�？嫉闹�識點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．