Question

【題目】假定你是李華， 是校報的英語小記者。最近，你校組織開展“創(chuàng)建綠色校園”活動。請你針對這一活動，以“Building a Green Campus”為題寫一篇報道，內容包括：

1.創(chuàng)建綠色校園的意義

2.一些校園浪費的現(xiàn)象

3.建綠色校園的建議并發(fā)出倡議

注意：1.詞數120左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Building a Green Campus

The campaign of “building a green campus” has been launched in our school in order to call on us to save resources and raise our awareness of environmental protection.

Waste on campus can be seen everywhere, which has become an increasingly serious problem. Food is thrown away everywhere, which will do harm to the environment.

It is everyone’s responsibility to build a green campus. First of all, we’d better carry on the campaign of “cleaning the plate”. Besides, we should resist using disposable chopsticks and recycle the plastic bags, which are basic measures to protect the environment on campus.

In a word, building a green campus needs us to make joint efforts by doing pieces of small matters in our daily life.

【解析】本題考查提綱類作文。首先要認真審題，假定你是李華， 是校報的英語小記者。最近，你校組織開展“創(chuàng)建綠色校園”活動。請你針對這一活動，以“Building a Green Campus”為題寫一篇報道，內容包括：1.創(chuàng)建綠色校園的意義2.一些校園浪費的現(xiàn)象3.建綠色校園的建議并發(fā)出倡議。其次要確定時態(tài)，表示客觀事實，所以這篇文章要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。然后要確定文章的結構，按照題目所給出的內容，逐條翻譯即可。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。正確使用寫信的格式，詞數控制在120左右。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些高級句型。例如Waste on campus can be seen everywhere, which has become an increasingly serious problem.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句Food is thrown away everywhere, which will do harm to the environment.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。It is everyone’s responsibility to build a green campus. 這里的it是形式主語。