Question

【題目】假設你是李華，下面是你校對學生近視情況做的調查，請你寫一篇文章刊登在校報上，呼吁大家愛護眼睛，保護視力。

學生的近視率幾乎達到了50%。

導致學生近視的原因：學習任務過重；長時間看電腦；不良的閱讀習慣等等。

怎樣預防近視：……

注意：1. 詞數100詞左右 2. 可以適當增加內容使行文連貫

參考詞匯：近視：short-sighted

Recently, our school has done a survey about the short-sighted students in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, our school has done a survey about the short-sighted students in our school. According to the result, nearly 50% of the students have become short-sighted.

There are several reasons behind this result. First, students have too much homework to do every day and they are likely to overuse their eyes, thus making their eyes too tired. Second, some students spend too much time surfing the Internet, which is harmful to their eyes. Besides, some students’ bad reading habits damage their eyes, such as lying on the bed to read or reading in dim light.

To protect our eyes, we should let our eyes rest properly, do eye exercises and form good reading habits. Only in these ways can we prevent shortsightedness.

【解析】書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力。寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確。

【范文亮點】

文章中First, students have too much homework to do every day and they are likely to overuse their eyes, thus making their eyes too tired用了現在分詞making作結果狀語。

Second, some students spend too much time surfing the Internet, which is harmful to their eyes句中which引導非限制性定語從句修飾前面的整個句子內容。

Only in these ways can we prevent shortsightedness倒裝句使用精煉。