Question

最近我校對(duì)高一學(xué)生入學(xué)一學(xué)期后的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況做了一個(gè)調(diào)查，情況如下。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)下表的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。

60%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為	40%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為	我的觀點(diǎn)
1. 高中學(xué)習(xí)很有壓力； 2. 科目難度大，課后作業(yè)多； 3. 沒(méi)時(shí)間參加鍛煉等活動(dòng)	1. 適應(yīng)并喜歡高中生活； 2. 課程更有趣，活動(dòng)更豐富，受益匪淺。	……

要求：    1. 詞數(shù)120；    2. 文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：course 課程

Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has

become used to the life in senior high school. ­­                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 60% of the students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows: Firstly the subject they are learning now are obviously more different. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities.

On the contrary, others say they have become used to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot.

As far as I’m concerned, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything effectively. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫作屬于典型的議論文文體，將文章分成“三段式”來(lái)表示觀點(diǎn)。首先對(duì)60%的高一學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述，表示他們認(rèn)為高一生活一點(diǎn)也不輕松About 60% of the students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing.再分別對(duì)三點(diǎn)原因進(jìn)行闡述，注意使用表示層次關(guān)系的詞，如besides.然后對(duì)相反的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行陳述On the contrary，引出不同的觀點(diǎn)，同樣對(duì)所列舉的兩點(diǎn)原因進(jìn)行闡述。最后表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)該平衡好學(xué)習(xí)和課外活動(dòng)的時(shí)間we should balance our study and other activities.同時(shí)對(duì)文章進(jìn)行總結(jié)Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.點(diǎn)名題意。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的寫作不難，對(duì)于敘事類文體，對(duì)文章的條理性要把握好，在寫作過(guò)程注意使用“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的詞語(yǔ)或是句型表達(dá)，多使用被動(dòng)，倒裝、虛擬來(lái)提升作文的美度。在平時(shí)寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。