Question

假設(shè)你叫李津，現(xiàn)在在英國(guó)工作，你的朋友陳立寫(xiě)信告訴你他打算赴英留學(xué)，想知道初到英國(guó)可能會(huì)遇到的困難。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封回信，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1.可能會(huì)遇到的困難：語(yǔ)言方面的障礙、飲食的不習(xí)慣、想家、孤獨(dú)等；
2.鼓勵(lì)他并表示愿意幫助他。
注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于l 00字。
2.信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Chen Li,
I’m glad to hear from you.You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK.
                                               
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin

Answer 1

Dear Chen Li,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK. Now, I’d like to tell you something about it.
First, you may have the problem about the language you think you are well prepared.You may find it difficult to communication with the natives, because many of them have a strong accent. Besides, you may not get used to the western food here or even hate to have it. What’s more, you may feel lonely and miss your family and friends, especially in the very beginning.
However, you needn’t worry about it. Several weeks later, you will get used to everything here and love the place, and I’ll also try my best to help you when necessary.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin

試題分析：題目要求給陳立寫(xiě)一封回信，告訴他赴英留學(xué)可能會(huì)遇到的困難。題目是常見(jiàn)的書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，學(xué)生比較容易下筆�？梢苑殖扇�部分，第一部分總寫(xiě)，第二部分重點(diǎn)分析會(huì)遇到的困難；第三部分提出幫助。注意書(shū)信的格式要正確；使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作；正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，單詞拼寫(xiě)要正確；注意不要出現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)法方面的錯(cuò)誤。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文注意使用Now, First, Besides, What’s more, However, Several weeks later, and等來(lái)銜接上下文，使作文看起來(lái)很緊湊，并且很有條理；
范文使用了定語(yǔ)從句(that) you think you are well prepared；固定句型find it difficult to communication with the natives；原因狀語(yǔ)從句because many of them have a strong accent；try my best to help you省略when (it is) necessary等重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)法功底；
范文海使用了一些短語(yǔ)和固定搭配，如：get used to, hate to have it, I’d like to, feel lonely, in the very beginning, worry about等，使作文變得充實(shí)、生動(dòng)。