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【題目】某英文報社正在開展“低碳生活，從我做起”的征文活動，請給其投稿。內(nèi)容要點如下：

好處：減少二氧化碳的排放，有利于緩解全球變暖；

具體建議：隨手關(guān)掉不用的電器，如電燈、電視和電腦；

步行或騎自行車出行；如果路程遠(yuǎn)，乘坐公交車

購物時盡量使用環(huán)保布袋，不用一次性塑料袋。

大家都行動起來，我們就能與環(huán)境和諧共處。

注意： 詞數(shù)不少于100；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：二氧化碳排放 carbon dioxide emissions；一次性塑料袋disposable plastic bags

Nowadays,it is becoming common to lead a low-carbon lifestyle._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Nowadays, it is becoming common to lead a low-carbon lifestyle. We know that carbon dioxide is the major greenhouse gas that causes global warming. By living a low-carbon life, we can cut carbon dioxide emissions, which may contribute to stopping the temperature from rising.

There are many ways of leading an environmentally friendly life. For instance, we can turn off electrical appliances like lights, the television and the computer when we aren’t using them. Cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy, so we could walk or ride a bicycle for short trips. If we need to travel a long distance we can take public transportation. It is also wise to use reusable cloth bags and not disposable plastic bags when we are shopping.

I believe that as long as each of us makes a small change to cut carbon emissions, we can make a big difference and develop a harmonious relationship with the environment.

【解析】本文是有關(guān)環(huán)保類的熱點話題，是“低碳生活，從我做起”的征文投稿，通過審題可知用一般現(xiàn)在時，用第一人稱we，文章分三部分寫，第一部分寫低碳生活的重要性，好處：減少二氧化碳的排放，有利于緩解全球變暖；第二段寫從我做起，我們可以做哪些事減少碳排放，可參考以下要點：隨手關(guān)掉不用的電器，如電燈、電視和電腦；步行或騎自行車出行；如果路程遠(yuǎn)，乘坐公交車 購物時盡量使用環(huán)保布袋，不用一次性塑料袋。第三段發(fā)出號召呼吁每個人貢獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量，大家都行動起來，我們就能與環(huán)境和諧共處。

文章要求觀點明確，要點全面，前后連貫。還要注意句式的變換和使用一些高級詞匯和句型為文章增加亮點。比如賓語從句that carbon dioxide is the major greenhouse gas that causes global warming.定語從句which may contribute to stopping the temperature from rising. It is also wise to do句型。高級詞匯contribute to, as long as, make a difference等的使用和For instance, not only…but also等連接詞的運用。