Question

假如你是李華，參加了你校外籍教師David成立的英語學習俱樂部，下周的活動主題是交流自己的英語學習體會。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。
1.學習方法：多記有用短語或句子，多讀英文報紙，觀看英文節(jié)目；
2.學習收獲：開闊視野，了解異國文化，與外國人交流；
3.學習困難：經常遺忘所學詞匯。
4.注意：①詞數(shù)：80-120；②可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am greatly honored to share my experience in studying English. In today’s world, mastering a foreign language will be helpful in our life. Here are my learning methods.
First, I think it useful to learn some grammar and remember as many useful sentence patterns as I can. I believe the more we read, the better our English will be. So I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines after class, which helps to improve my English. Besides, TV and radio programs are of great help.
Learning English not only increase my awareness of foreign cultures but also helps me to communicate with English-speaking people and to make more new friends. However, sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have just learned. Could Mr David and my dear friends give me some practical advice?
Thanks for your attention.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假如你是李華，參加了你校外籍教師David成立的英語學習俱樂部，下周的活動主題是交流自己的英語學習體會。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。1.學習方法：多記有用短語或句子，多讀英文報紙，觀看英文節(jié)目；2.學習收獲：開闊視野，了解異國文化，與外國人交流；3.學習困難：經常遺忘所學詞匯。需要寫的內容已經粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)80-120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】So I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines after class, which helps to improve my English.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句；However, sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have just learned.這里含有一個because引導的原因狀語從句。