Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack對中國的鐵路很感興趣，想乘坐火車旅行。請根據(jù)以下要點提示，寫一封書信，介紹中國鐵路系統(tǒng)。

1．火車類型：高鐵（HSR）（G）（300km／h）；

動車（CRH）（D）（200km／h）；

快車（Express）（T／Z／K）（100km／h）；

2．火車優(yōu)點：安全，可以觀賞沿途風景，省錢。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack,

I’m honoured that you show great interest in our trains.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m honoured that you show greal interest in our trains.Now we have three kinds of trains.The traditional one is the express train.which is slow but cheap,with etter K/T/Z marked on the ticket.Another one is CRH,running at the speed of 200 kilometers per hour,and you can see letter. However,the fastest train is HSR traveling up to 300 kilometers per hour.Their tickets are marked with letter G.

Traveling by train is safe over a long distance.Besides,you can see the beautiful scenery along the railway.It won’t cost you too much.

Looking forward to your visit to China!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題是提綱類作文，文體是說明文。介紹中國鐵路系統(tǒng)，要點包括：1．火車類型；2．火車優(yōu)點。要點要全不能有遺漏和省略。要注意謀篇布局的順序，本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，使用自己熟悉的句式，但盡可能地使句式多樣化。

文章開頭以一個從句引出本文的話題：I’m honoured that you show greal interest in our trains. 介紹火車的三種類型時，使用了由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句及過去分詞作賓補： The traditional one is the express train. which is slow but cheap, with letter K/T/Z marked on the ticket. 接著用把兩個單句連接，同時運用了由非謂語中的動詞ing形式作定語; Another one is CRH,running at the speed of 200 kilometers per hour和the fastest train is HSR traveling up to 300 kilometers per hour。動詞的ing形式作主語：Traveling by train is safe。一個被動語態(tài)：Their tickets are marked with letter G。恰當?shù)剡\用的連詞and，However,besides.

總之本文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，層次清晰，行文連貫。運用了名詞從句和定語從句，靈活地使用了非謂語我多種形式及被動語態(tài)。連詞運用的也恰當，讓文更有條理。