Question

7．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Because we are social beings，the quality of our lives depend on our interpersonal relationships．One strength of the human condition is our possibility to give and receive support from one other under stressful conditions．Social support makes up of the exchange of resources among people basing on their interpersonal ties．Those who strong support systems appear more able to deal with major life changes and daily problems．People with strong social ties live longer and have good health than those who without such ties．Studies over types of illnesses from depression to heart disease showing that the presence of social support helps people defend ourselves against illnesses，and the absent of such support makes poor health more likely．

Answer 1

分析 我們都是社交生物，我們的生活質(zhì)量依賴于人際交往．人類生存的一大優(yōu)勢(shì)是在壓力條件下能夠得到彼此的支持，這種社會(huì)支持建立在人際關(guān)系的基礎(chǔ)上，構(gòu)成了人與人之間的資源交換．有了強(qiáng)大的社會(huì)支持系統(tǒng)，人們就能夠處理重大的生活變化和日常問題，也可以活得更久，更健康．研究表明：很多疾病都于社會(huì)交往缺失有關(guān)．

解答 Because we are social beings，the quality of our lives depend on our interpersonal relationships．
                                                                               depends
One strength of the human condition is our possibility to give and receive support from one other under stressful conditions．
                                       conditions                                                                         each
Social support makes up of the exchange of resources among people basing on their interpersonal ties．
                                                                                                   based
Those who∧strong support systems appear more able to deal with major life changes and daily problems．
               加have
People with strong social ties live longer and have good health than those who without such ties．
                                                                         better                          去掉
Studies over types of illnesses from depression to heart disease showing that the presence of social support 
                                                                                              show
helps people defend ourselvesagainst illnesses，and the absent of such support makes poor health more likely．
                              themselves                                     absence
1．depend改為depends．題干中主語是the quality抽象名詞，謂語要用單數(shù)．
2．condition改為conditions．句意表達(dá)的是復(fù)數(shù)概念，人類的生存條件．要用復(fù)數(shù)．
3．one改為each．短語搭配，each other彼此．
4．basing改為based．短語搭配，be based on建立在…基礎(chǔ)上，非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)中be動(dòng)詞可以省略．
5．加have．題干中who引導(dǎo)定語從句修飾those，從句要有謂語動(dòng)詞．
6．good改為better．句意表達(dá)的是比較，要用比較級(jí)．
7．who去掉．題干中without such ties是介詞短語，不是從句，不用連詞．
8．showing改為show．題干中show是作謂語的動(dòng)詞，主語studies是復(fù)數(shù)，要用動(dòng)詞原形．
9．ourselves改為themselves．邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤，句意指代的是people，要用第三人稱形式的反身代詞．
10．a(chǎn)bsent改為absence．題干中the absence是用來作主語的，要用名詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．常考的知識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．