Question

8．據(jù)報道，今年國慶來自全國各地約11萬群眾在天安門廣場觀看升國旗儀式．升旗儀式結(jié)束后，廣場上滯留了多達5噸左右的垃圾．150名保潔員耗時30分鐘才清理完畢．請根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇短文：
①簡要描述報道內(nèi)容．
②針對現(xiàn)象發(fā)表個人看法．
③提出文明倡議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120詞左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2．參考詞匯：天安門廣場Tian'anmen Square；升旗儀式flag-raising ceremony；保潔員cleaner
As was reported，about 110thousand people from all over the country           ．

Answer 1

分析 本文為文明及環(huán)保類話題作文．
話題背景為：年國慶來自全國各地約11萬群眾在天安門廣場觀看升國旗儀式．升旗儀式結(jié)束后，廣場上滯留了多達5噸左右的垃圾．150名保潔員耗時30分鐘才清理完畢．
寫作主題可以為：保護環(huán)境，人人有責
寫作要點為：1，描述話題內(nèi)容；2，分析原因；3，提供建議及呼吁．

解答 One possible version：
As was reported，about 110 thousand people from all over the country gathered at Tian'anmen Square on October 1，watching the grand flag-raising ceremony．However，a large amount of rubbish was left after the crowd gradually broke up．It was not until 30 minutes later that 150 cleaners disposed of all rubbish．
To be frank，I was really shocked and angry on reading the news．We have been educated never to litter in public since our childhood．However，on such a formal occasion，it's surprising that our citizens should behave so badly in public．From the point of my views，I felt ashamed of this kind of conduct．
Therefore，as a citizen I firmly advocate that we should take good care of our living environment and cherish the fruits of other people's labor．Only if each of us behaves ourselves and makes contributions to our civilized and harmonious society can we enjoy a better life together．
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點評 考生需根據(jù)話題信息，根據(jù)所提供信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．