Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分25分）
現(xiàn)在，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生缺乏體育鍛煉，導(dǎo)致身體素質(zhì)下降。根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。
缺乏鍛煉的原因（學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)太重、鍛煉辛苦、無(wú)法堅(jiān)持……）
你對(duì)學(xué)校和對(duì)同學(xué)們的建議
注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；詞數(shù)120左右。

Answer 1

Now it is known that fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, which makes them weak and easily tired.
There are many reasons for this. First of all, some of the students complain that they have too much homework, resulting in less time to take exercise. In addition, some of them think that it is very difficult for them to keep doing exercise, because it is a very hard thing.
Because of lack of physical activities, many students are in poor health. I suggest that our school should take measures to encourage more students to take part in sports. For us students, no matter how busy we are, it is necessary to spare some time to do exercise.

試題分析：本文是一篇給出漢語(yǔ)提示的提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作。文章只給出簡(jiǎn)單的提示，這要求考生在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，需要發(fā)揮自己的想象能力適當(dāng)拓寬。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全：（1）引出話(huà)題；（2）缺乏鍛煉的原因（學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)太重、鍛煉辛苦、無(wú)法堅(jiān)持……）；（3）你對(duì)學(xué)校和對(duì)同學(xué)們的建議；2.三段成文法。第一段總說(shuō)；第二段闡述現(xiàn)象；第三段發(fā)表自己的看法。3.人稱(chēng)：第三人稱(chēng)為主；4.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；5.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、句型和短語(yǔ)，以增加文章的檔次；6.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】使用了從句：1.定語(yǔ)從句N(xiāo)ow it is known that fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, which makes them weak and easily tired.2.賓語(yǔ)從句some of the students complain that they have too much homework, resulting in less time to take exercise.3.狀語(yǔ)從句because it is a very hard thing. no matter how busy we are, 使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)：resulting in less time to take exercise 使用了連詞和插入語(yǔ)：First of all, In addition, In addition, For us students,使用了短語(yǔ)：result in，keep doing，Because of， lack of等。