Question

16．請結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫作．
A mother said，"My son is always on the phone，sleeping，out with his friends．or in his room．He never has time to talk to me．"
要求：（1）就此材料發(fā)表你的看法； 
  （2）緊扣材料，有明確的觀點； 
 （3）詞數(shù)不少于60；  
（4）在答題卡上作答．
"My son is always on the phone，sleepinr g，out with his friends，or in his room．He never has time to talk to
me．"The words above show the deep sadness and loneliness of her as well as other old parents．
Nowadays，young men look so busy in modern society that they will never feel free to live or talk with their
parents，even on some festival days．However，to the parents，what they really hope for is that their children can
come to see them just for a little time to give them a frequent telephone call．
The older they get，the more our old parents will feel．However busy we may be，wwe should try our best to
spend more time talking with them and accompanying them．It isnot just because they once gave us so much
selfless love，but it's our duty to look after them well．．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于半開放式作文，主要以論述的方式為主，圍繞所提供材料的主題，進行舉例論證，表達自己的觀點和看法，舉例并對引文的觀點進行論證．在寫作時以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．重要短語：as well as （和，又，也），be busy in …（忙于…），feel free （感覺空閑），talk with…（與…交談），hope for …（希望…），give sb a frequent telephone call （時常給某人打電話），try our best to（努力做某事），spend more time doing（花更多時間做某事），accompany sb（陪伴某人），give sb so much selfless love（給某人無私的愛），look after sb（照顧某人）．
【高分句型一】
1．However，to the parents，①what they really hope for is ②that their children can come to see them just for a little time to give them a frequent telephone call．
①此處是由連接代詞"what"引導的主語從句，連接代詞"what"在從句中作介詞"for"的賓語．
②此處是由連接詞"that"引導的表語從句，"that"在從句中無意義，只起連接詞的作用．
【高分句型二】
1．The older they get，the more our old parents will feel．
此處是"The+形容詞比較級+主語+謂語；the+形容詞比較級+主語+謂語"句型，意為"越來…，越…"．
【高分句型三】
3．However busy we may be，we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them．
此處是由"However+形容詞+主語+謂語"引導的讓步狀語從句，也可理解為"No matter how busy 主語+謂語"，主句為"we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them．"．

解答 "My son is always on the phone，sleeping，out with his friends，or in his room．He never has time to talk to me．"The words above show the deep sadness and loneliness of her as well as other old parents．（揭示所給材料主題）
        Nowadays，young men look so busy in modern society that they will never feel free to live or talk with their parents，even on some festival days．However，to the parents，what they really hope for is that their children can come to see them just for a little time to give them a frequent telephone call．【高分句型一】（就材料舉例論證）
        The older they get，the more our old parents will feel．【高分句型二】However busy we may be，we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them．【高分句型三】It isn't just because they once gave us so much selfless love，but it's our duty to look after them well．（發(fā)表自己的觀點）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．