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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

As is often the case,when people are attending meetings,having meals or waiting for buses,you can always find it addicted to their phones,completely ignore others.

This is really a common phenomenon in our life.The reason is because smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games but keep in touch with friends through QQ and Wechat.However,too many exposure to phones is bad for people in term of health.Moreover,people who were engaged in phones fail to communicate well those around them.

As far as I'm concerned,people should wise make use of their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile,they should be care more about their family members and friends rather than mobile phones.

Answer 1

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【解析】試題分析：本文介紹了手機(jī)的諸多功能使得人們現(xiàn)在越來越依賴它。

1.考查代詞。此處意思是說你可以發(fā)現(xiàn)他們沉溺于手機(jī)，不能用it來指代，他們是人，故用them，賓格代詞。

2.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。逗號(hào)隔開沒有連接詞，故此部分不能做句子，ignore要用非謂語形式，邏輯主語是people，和ignore之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞，ignoring。

3.考查連詞。The reason is that是固定句型：原因是……；The reason is because是病句：原因是因?yàn)�，是病句，故�?yīng)把because改為that。

4.考查連詞。此處是并列關(guān)系，說明手機(jī)的功能，故用and。

5.考查代詞。Exposure是不可數(shù)名詞，用much修飾，不用many。

6.考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。in terms of固定搭配，就……而言。

7.考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文介紹的是手機(jī)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描述，故此處也用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，ｗｅｒｅ改為ａｒｅ。

８.考查介詞。此處為固定搭配，ｃｏｍｍｕｎｉｃａｔｅ�。鳎椋簦琛。螅夂湍橙私涣�，少了介詞ｗｉｔｈ，加上。

９.考查副詞。此處為副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故改為ｗｉｓｅｌｙ。

１０.考查語態(tài)。此處為主動(dòng)語態(tài)，他們關(guān)心家人是主動(dòng)的，故去掉ｂｅ。