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10．假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參加學(xué)校組織的"英語學(xué)習(xí)師生座談會"，請你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，簡單介紹自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對學(xué)校今后的英語教學(xué)提出建議．

自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況	1．英語學(xué)習(xí)的目的
	2．英語學(xué)習(xí)的方法
	3．課外自學(xué)的途徑
	…．
對學(xué)校英語教學(xué)的建議	（請考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點建議）．

注意：
（1）對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯．
（2）詞數(shù)150左右．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)．
（3）Dear teacher and schoolmates，It's a great pleasure for me to be today and share my
experience of learning English with you．I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future．Naturally it's very important for me to learn English well．As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building．I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible．After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio．Besides，I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources．
Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school．Firstly，we should be given more opportunities to use what we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it．Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them．Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals．
Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本文為應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給表格的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，寫作要點：介紹自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對學(xué)校今后的英語教學(xué)提出建議．既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．基本時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一、三人稱為主．重要短語：share sth with sb （與某人分享…），be interested in（對…..感興趣），learned a lot from…．（從…．學(xué)到很多），have a better grasp of …（更好地掌握…），recommend sth （推薦…），put sth to use（把某物投入使用），whenever possible…（無論何時可能的情況下…），make some suggestions on…..（提出關(guān)于…的建議）．

解答 Dear teacher and schoolmates，
It's a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you．I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future．（1．英語學(xué)習(xí)的目的）Naturally it's very important for me to learn English well．As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building．【高分句型】I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible．（2．英語學(xué)習(xí)的方法）After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio．Besides，I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources．（3．課外自學(xué)的途徑）（自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況）
      Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school．Firstly，we should be given more opportunities to use what we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it．【高分句型】Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them．Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals．【高分句型】（對學(xué)校英語教學(xué)的建議）
       Thank you for listening．

點評 表格類作文寫作要注意：1）不同文體的格式，避免"填表式"表達(dá).2）靈活變通，避免"硬譯式"，表達(dá)表格中的漢語提示簡潔凝練，概括性強，表達(dá)時切忌逐字逐句翻譯，要做靈活調(diào)整或進(jìn)行補充；較為抽象、復(fù)雜的漢語提示應(yīng)善于變通轉(zhuǎn)換．3）銜接，避免"單句式"表達(dá)，使全文語篇通順連貫．