Question

14．假如你是李華．你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭(zhēng)吵．3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一個(gè)禮物來緩和關(guān)系，他特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom回一封郵件，信的內(nèi)容包括：
1．推薦一個(gè)禮物；
2．你的理由；
3．其他和解建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．
If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．
As far as I know，Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body．In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship．Besides，taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport．It's convenient for him to get around as well．
Apart from giving him a gift，you can also adopt other means，such as travelling，seeing a movie，having dinner and going shopping．No matter what you do，being sincere is the most important．I really hope that we can be good friends forever．
yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．
如果我是你，我會(huì)考慮把自行車作為生日禮物送給他．
高分句型二：
In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship．
同時(shí)，你們可以經(jīng)常去騎自行車一起郊游，這有助于重建你們的友誼．

解答 Dear Tom，
     I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．（高分句型一）
     As far as I know，Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body．In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship（高分句型二）．Besides，taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport．It's convenient for him to get around as well．
   Apart from giving him a gift，you can also adopt other means，such as travelling，seeing a movie，having dinner and going shopping．No matter what you do，being sincere is the most important．I really hope that we can be good friends forever．
                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．