Question

【題目】請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

The 18-year-old girl from Linyi, Shandong province scored 568 points on her college entrance exam this year and was admitted to Nanjing University of Posts and Telecommunications.

On Aug 19, Xu received a phone call from an unknown person telling her that she was due to receive student funding. Following the call, Xu transferred a 9,900-yuan "activation fee" into the man’s bank account, hoping the money would appear in her student account, but it never did.

After discovering they had been cheated, the family immediately reported the incident to the police, but Xu was said to be frustrated. On their way home, she suddenly fainted and despite doctors’ best efforts to rescue her, she passed away.

The death of Xu yuyu immediately caused an outcry over the society, and once again, it fired a public anger towards those who commit heartless fraud(欺詐).

So how was Xu’s private information leaked out?

Reporters have discovered that there are many people who openly sell the examinee’s information online. The information includes the examinee’s name, school, phone number, and address. The personal information of examinee has become the target of the online fraud industry.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；

2. 用約120個詞就“Personal information leakage”談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺�，�?nèi)容包括：

（1）簡述個人信息泄露的危害及保護個人信息的重要性；

（2）就如何保護個人信息提幾點建議（至少兩點）。

【寫作要求】

1. 闡述觀點或提供論據(jù)時，不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱等。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

Answer 1

【答案】

A girl from Shandong, who would soon begin her university life, was cheated out of 9,900 yuan due to personal information leakage. The heavy blow claimed her life, which aroused anger in society.

The leakage of personal information is of great harm. Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls, but also people may be cheated out of money or be put in danger. Thus, the protection of personal information is of vital importance in order for common people to maintain a peaceful and safe life, as well as to protect one’s own fortune.

Here are the tips on how to protect one’s personal information. Never click any link on phones or computers unless it can be utterly trusted. Also, avoid connecting smart phones to any untrusted WiFi in public places. Apart from the efforts of common people, the government must spare no effort to fight against criminals selling others’ personal information.

【解析】

試題分析：依據(jù)寫作要求文章要分兩部分來寫，第一部分用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；第二部分用約120個詞就“Personal information leakage”談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺�，�?nèi)容包括：（1）簡述個人信息泄露的危害及保護個人信息的重要性；（2）就如何保護個人信息提幾點建議（至少兩點）。在第一部分約30詞的概括中要注意人﹑事﹑理的概括呈現(xiàn)，寫作時不能摘抄文中的句子，必須要進行概括且能夠使用較為高級的句型句式；在第二部分約120詞的寫作中一方面需要簡述個人信息泄露的危害及保護個人信息的重要性，另一方面就如何保護個人信息提出至少兩點建議。寫作時要把所要求的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，采用三段式，內(nèi)容齊全，布局合理，使用高級句子。第一段中的“who would soon begin her university life；which aroused anger in society”使用非限制性定語從句；第二段中“Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls, but also…”運用了倒裝句句式；Thus等連接詞的運用也使得行文更為流暢。