Question

1．在緊張的高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征求學(xué)生意見假如你叫張華，請根據(jù)以下提示，給英語王老師寫封信．表達你們的需求和建議．
●適當(dāng)放慢進度，留出思考時間；
●反復(fù)訓(xùn)練重要、易錯知識點；
●指導(dǎo)方法；
●減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量：
●給予更多鼓勵．
注意：
1．根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫．
2．詞數(shù)：不少于l00詞．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，小計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Wang，
We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views．
In the course of the general revision，what we need is solid foundation．
       ．
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 亮點句型一：As for those important points which also make us confused，would you please give us more practice in case we forget？至于那些讓我們困惑的重要點，請你多練習(xí)一下好嗎以防我們忘記了．此句中which引導(dǎo)的是限制性定語從句，被修飾的先行詞為points，which在從句中做主語；in case"萬一，以防"是連詞，引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句．
亮點句型二：We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time．如果您能給我們一些不時的鼓勵，我們將不勝感激．We would appreciate it if 用的是虛擬語氣"如果…我們將不勝感激"．

解答 Dear Mr．Wang，
     We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views．
     In the course of the general revision，what we need is solid foundation．As you know，we didn't learn well enough in the first two years，so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something．Besides，we need a little more time to think for ourselves．As for those important points which also make us confused，
would you please give us more practice in case we forget（亮點句型一）？Meanwhile，we need your instruction，for example，how to write in natural English．I still have another request：assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently．【表達需求】
     By the way，we often feel frustrated，which has a very bad effect on our study．We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time（亮點句型二）．【尋求建議】

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．