Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校計(jì)劃周六舉行主題為保護(hù)環(huán)境人人有責(zé)演講比賽，請(qǐng)給交流生Chris寫(xiě)封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參賽；

2.告知比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；

3.就如何準(zhǔn)備提出建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

Dear Chris，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris，

Knowing that you have been concerned about the protection of our environment, I am delighted to tell you there is a speech entitled “Start from ourselves to protect our earth”. Here are more details.

As scheduled, the contest is to be held in our lecture hall by the Student Union on March 10th, 2020. You are supposed to get adequately prepared before the contest. Above all, it's strongly recommended that you should talk about the present corona virus outbreak which caused great loss to our lives and economy, and further analyze the causes and future prevention measures. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for this topic, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. If you want to attend, please come to the school assembly hall, which is located in the third floor. Don't miss the chance of being a sponsor of protecting our planet, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you.

Don't hesitate to take part! I'm sure you will do your part in protecting our earth.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)交流生Chris參加主題為保護(hù)環(huán)境人人有責(zé)的演講比賽。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段提出邀請(qǐng)。第二段告知詳情和建議。第三段寒暄結(jié)束。

要求：1. 邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參賽（be delighted to tell you）

2.詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)情況

1）告知比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)（in our lecture hall by the Student Union on March 10th, 2020）

2）就如何準(zhǔn)備提出建議。（get adequately prepared; talk about the present corona virus outbreak）

3.寒暄結(jié)束

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be delighted to; as scheduled; be supposed to; get prepared; talk about; do one’s part in

第三步：連詞成句

1. Knowing that you have been concerned about the protection of our environment, I am delighted to tell you there is a speech entitled “tart from ourselves to protect our earth”.

2. As scheduled, the contest is to be held in our lecture hall by the Student Union on March 10th, 2020.

3. You are supposed to get adequately prepared before the contest.

4. Above all, it's strongly recommended that you should talk about the present corona virus outbreak which caused great loss to our lives and economy, and further analyze the causes and future prevention measures.

5. I'm sure you will do your part in protecting our earth.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改